On the last poster (the 75% one), I feel like the message at the bottom feels almost unintentionally demeaning, like how it says, "you don't deserve to write yourself off the way you have been." I feel like it assumes too much - perhaps someone's reading the poster who doesn't engage in harmful activities.
I like the change to lower case in the second to last poster.
I'm not sure how I feel about "you are different" being all caps and "keep it that way" being lower case. I kind of want to see it all lower case?
I really like how you changed the placement of the 91% in the second poster.
On the last poster (the 75% one), I feel like the message at the bottom feels almost unintentionally demeaning, like how it says, "you don't deserve to write yourself off the way you have been." I feel like it assumes too much - perhaps someone's reading the poster who doesn't engage in harmful activities.
ReplyDeleteI like the change to lower case in the second to last poster.
I'm not sure how I feel about "you are different" being all caps and "keep it that way" being lower case. I kind of want to see it all lower case?
I really like how you changed the placement of the 91% in the second poster.