The first and second posters are really great. I like your description of "don't delete yourself."
I really, REALLY like the third one (hand holding the sticker). I get the obvious message (explaining how to share/use the sticker), but I think the position of the hand conveys an underlying message, as well. It's inviting, almost a helping hand. I really like that.
It's a little hard to determine the efficacy of the fourth poster (look in the mirror, like what you see) without actually having the mirror in front of me. I think I'm still in favor of the "circle something you like on yourself" instead of "write something positive about yourself."
I also really like the poster. I think maybe "Under the Influence" should be larger? Although I like the fact that "something is happening" is large, as well, to draw people in and make them wonder, hey, what IS happening? haha =]
I think the first one sounds a lot better than the last version of it I remember.
The second one I am still on the fence about. I love the sentiment expressed on it, but it seems empty still. I feel like it, and everything overall, still needs more imagery. I'm afraid I don't have the answer to that riddle though. Keep thinking, it will come to you!
The sticker one is a little wordy still, but I get the message and I think it is on the right path, you and I already talked about the photographed image.
Definitely think the wording is better on the first poster I love the gray background with white text, I am not sure if they have all been that way but I really like it,
The second one I agree I am still on the fence about as well I totally get the sentiment, and I like the idea of these sentiments all being different and these posters placed everywhere with these quotes, sayings, sentiments, etc. I do think these have to really be strong though so maybe just start making a list of sayings, words, quotes that could be used.
I like the third poster I know there will be a different picture of course but it is a little wordy, maybe rewriting and shortening will make it look visually better? ( have Jessica Biretta read it).
The fourth design I still think this needs work, again its the wording its not strong enough yet, but I really like the mirror idea so it needs tweaked a little.
The last poster the one for the show as a whole I really like the layout it really mimics the cards really nicely but is also different. I think you should maybe move all of the type and align it to the right? I think its darker on the that side so the type will definitely show up better? I think Under the Influence should be a a bit larger. Other than that it looks good.
The first and second posters are really great. I like your description of "don't delete yourself."
ReplyDeleteI really, REALLY like the third one (hand holding the sticker). I get the obvious message (explaining how to share/use the sticker), but I think the position of the hand conveys an underlying message, as well. It's inviting, almost a helping hand. I really like that.
It's a little hard to determine the efficacy of the fourth poster (look in the mirror, like what you see) without actually having the mirror in front of me. I think I'm still in favor of the "circle something you like on yourself" instead of "write something positive about yourself."
I also really like the poster. I think maybe "Under the Influence" should be larger? Although I like the fact that "something is happening" is large, as well, to draw people in and make them wonder, hey, what IS happening? haha =]
In reference to the fourth poster, I think I like the first word choice that you used (something like, take a look in the mirror, beautiful huh?).
ReplyDeleteI think the first one sounds a lot better than the last version of it I remember.
ReplyDeleteThe second one I am still on the fence about. I love the sentiment expressed on it, but it seems empty still. I feel like it, and everything overall, still needs more imagery. I'm afraid I don't have the answer to that riddle though. Keep thinking, it will come to you!
The sticker one is a little wordy still, but I get the message and I think it is on the right path, you and I already talked about the photographed image.
Definitely think the wording is better on the first poster I love the gray background with white text, I am not sure if they have all been that way but I really like it,
ReplyDeleteThe second one I agree I am still on the fence about as well I totally get the sentiment, and I like the idea of these sentiments all being different and these posters placed everywhere with these quotes, sayings, sentiments, etc. I do think these have to really be strong though so maybe just start making a list of sayings, words, quotes that could be used.
I like the third poster I know there will be a different picture of course but it is a little wordy, maybe rewriting and shortening will make it look visually better? ( have Jessica Biretta read it).
The fourth design I still think this needs work, again its the wording its not strong enough yet, but I really like the mirror idea so it needs tweaked a little.
The last poster the one for the show as a whole I really like the layout it really mimics the cards really nicely but is also different. I think you should maybe move all of the type and align it to the right? I think its darker on the that side so the type will definitely show up better? I think Under the Influence should be a a bit larger. Other than that it looks good.
The posters are all good Jessica. What do you think, in your fourth poster can you make a mirror with an image embedded. Is just a suggestion.
ReplyDeleteThe show's poster layout is good. I think Under the Influence's font should be increased.
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